Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based
Nowadays education curriculum is not structured based upon on students interest. Before knowing the every students interest or suggestion the educational committee planed for the course which is ironically give a inimical effect on students mind. By doing this they undermined the most important fact that people are doing that thing more potentially in which they can find interest. Whether it is study or other matters it is always true as it’s based upon on human nature.
Students are like new born tiger they want to fight every crucial path of study if they find that suitable to them. If Jhon has special talent on math but the academy don’t want to add a course of math then Jhon’s talent will be futile. For instance,the most avid youth leader Facebook Ceo Mark Jukerbarg left Havard because he don’t like havard course plan & he thought his talent will be ruined if he continued in Havard.
Another misconception is that studnets are not mature enough to select their own course .Actually nobody wants to force the students his own course. Before course planning the authority can give a adviser to each of the student, so that the adviser can give a synopsis of that course. Nonetheless , doing this can be lengthy & tough but it can give a Idea about the subject before taking the class. In this consequence if the student is not motivated enough then he will not take that course & will intend to find another suitable course.
A motivated person is willing to do the the work in which he is motivated. Taking or having the desire course will effect students to get a good result. For example, In Bangladesh the private university is allowing students to give their suggestion before taking the course. As a result the private university studnets are doing good result rather than public university students where there are fixed course curriculum system. This motivation will rarefied them for the advanced of career.
Ultimately if anyone to pick out the best from a student ,it can be only possible if that student is motivated on that topic. Otherwise lot of hard work in unmotivated case also can cause a state of forlorn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ents interest. Before knowing the every students interest or suggestion the educational ...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...aned for the course which is ironically give a inimical effect on students mind. By ...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...for the course which is ironically give a inimical effect on students mind. By do...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y if they find that suitable to them. If Jhon has special talent on math but the ...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...os;s talent will be futile. For instance,the most avid youth leader Facebook Ceo Mar...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mature enough to select their own course .Actually nobody wants to force the stu...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Actually
...ture enough to select their own course .Actually nobody wants to force the students hi...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...select their own course .Actually nobody wants to force the students his own cour...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... course planning the authority can give a adviser to each of the student, so that...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e a synopsis of that course. Nonetheless , doing this can be lengthy & tough but i...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g this can be lengthy & tough but it can give a Idea about the subject before tak...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...can be lengthy & tough but it can give a Idea about the subject before taking th...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e. A motivated person is willing to do the the work in which he is motivated. Taking o...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e. A motivated person is willing to do the the work in which he is motivated. Taking o...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...Taking or having the desire course will effect students to get a good result. For exam...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... private university is allowing students to give their suggestion before taking t...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir suggestion before taking the course. As a result the private university studnet...
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Line 4, column 450, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rarefy'
Suggestion: rarefy
...curriculum system. This motivation will rarefied them for the advanced of career. Ultim...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...yone to pick out the best from a student ,it can be only possible if that student ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly possible if that student is motivated on that topic. Otherwise lot of hard wor...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...at student is motivated on that topic. Otherwise lot of hard work in unmotivated case al...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...case also can cause a state of forlorn.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, nonetheless, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90983606557 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55970488849 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505464480874 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2511151481 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168252261413 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06100096173 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531333677196 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977149573972 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654335402284 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.