In modern days, the majority of people tend to believe that advancements in technology and human actions developing day by day granted people choices. However, In my opinion, these choices are not sufficient and limited by where we live and certain situations requiring to reject. In this essay, I will support own opinion with reasons and represent a conclusion.
The first reason why I agree that people have not enough choices to do anything they wanted is that living in a country where you cannot choose own decision cause of culture and laws is observed so commonly. A particularly good example is India where their culture does not allow their civils to wear a dress with a long lap and that in Mongolia.
The secondary reason is that problems of healthy diminished foods to eat possibly and activities you want to do such as hiking and climbing. Generally, if you had become a disease that requires behaving no movements and obstacles the choices of your meals, decisions you can make will significantly decrease. One of the good illustrations is that people whose hearth process have been spoilt have to abandon salty foods and fitness activity.
On the other hand, smart devices such as a smartphone and the use of internet create choices associated with information. people often have this opinion because world widespread information has given a lot of chance to do anything. For example, nowadays after pupils graduated high school, they can apply for universities which were located in elsewhere of the world or can study in own country.
In conclusion, where we are living decides how many choices we have and the condition of our healthy forbid what we use items of food. However, developments in technology help people to increase chances to possibly do in their lifetime but I strongly believe that this increase in our choices is unsufficient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rejecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: rejecting
...e live and certain situations requiring to reject. In this essay, I will support own opin...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...ng in a country where you cannot choose own decision cause of culture and laws is o...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...te choices associated with information. people often have this opinion because world w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98397435897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73888097899 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2069783074 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249336876602 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756432963223 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597899582198 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126292264415 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446395469101 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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