All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal">The growing pollution and its harmful effects over the years
has inclined the people to think that the cars running on fossil fuels should
be banned and replaced with electric cars. Even I personally think the same, as
these do not contribute towards pollution and are more economical to the user. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Over the last decade people are tend to be more aware of the
carbon footprints and its side effects on the surroundings, in such a case,
cars which have o footprints and leaves no residue can act as a great deal. Additionally,
as these are charged via electricity which is a renewable energy and can be
produced in each household makes it's more feasible over the others. For Instance,
Bharat Benz a leading Indian car manufacturing
company proposed a design of its new E-Car which only require 1 hour of charging
through any switchboard and can last to 8-hour ride with full load.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Secondly, due to the increasing scarcity of petroleum in the
international market, the prices fluctuates and usually remains out of reach for
an average individual. Creating a better sustainable replacement can easily make
things fit in the pocket, as electricity is cheaper and government do not charge
extra taxes on using the same for the transportation services. Moreover, if
proper maintenance is done these cars can easily give more mileage than the one
renewable resources. For example, the Maruti Swift is assembled to give an
output of 60-kilometer in a unit, which is 4 times more than other cars running
in the same race. Such conditions make the usage of electric cars in days to day
life a better investment for an ordinary person.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">To conclude, although the power produced by cars using the
fossil fuels is comparatively high, but the destruction produced by it towards
the nature can outweigh the advantage. In my opinion, people should start using
electric cars as they are cheap and physically more eco-friendly to the nature.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57099697885 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.43968368791 2.80592935109 158% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5632462307 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.4 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226521259065 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980653941113 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725561560325 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609087019831 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670684561151 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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