Essay topics: You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city
Date: May 12, 2019
Dearest Rekha,
It's been a long time we were not in touch, hope you are doing well. The purpose of writing this letter is to share with you one of the happy moment of my life and if you listen that news, I am sure, you will more happy.
As you are aware that, from last two years, I was trying to get a job in Ontario university, as a lecturer but could not succeeded. With the hope of getting an appointment letter, last month again I have again applied for lecturer exam with better preparation and with more hard work. Yesterday they published our exam results via email, you can't believe that I not only cleared those exam but I have top in that exam. The university has not only send me my result but they have also emailed me my appointment letter.
As you know that I have never been there so I have no idea whether I can be able to sustain and will be able to live in that new city. The reason for bit fear are 1) challenges of weather 2) temperature 4) different city 4) To gel with of different members of the country.
As you are my very close friend, I would like to know further about the city, to know about the culture and to know about the standard of living as I have to plan my all stuff accordingly.
Give my regards to your hubby.
Yours faithfully,
Praful Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Date: May 12, 2019 Dearest Rekha, Its been a long time we were not in touc...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'succeed'
Suggestion: succeed
...university, as a lecturer but could not succeeded. With the hope of getting an appointmen...
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Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...blished our exam results via email, you cant believe that I not only cleared those e...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this exam' or 'those exams'?
Suggestion: this exam; those exams
...ou cant believe that I not only cleared those exam but I have top in that exam. The univer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24206349206 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24773828825 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7088750482 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341850806181 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114688975443 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679667463046 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16953210732 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561791149364 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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