You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have
Date: April 22, 2019
To,
Employment agency,
Respected Sir/Madam,
I am praful shah, a professionally Chartered Accountant, writing this letter with regards to searching of a good opportunity in an organisation, where I can get a job to show my skills and knowledge and at the same time organisation can get benefit out of my experiences. I have 6 year of experience after post qualification. Currently I have no job in hand.
During my Articleship training and post qualification i use to leading a statutory audit department. Now I am looking for an opportunities in the field of either statutory audit or in consultancy. As audit and consultancy was my core area and my strength. I am also trying to explore an opportunity in an Industry, if any, where I can get a good recognition monetary as well non monetary term.
In my earlier organisation i was managing 10-15 employee team along with planning to execution of the assignment. The assignments not only include statutory audit but it also covers the various type of due diligence. I was a part of the our organisation standardization committee who set the benchmark for good documentation.
With this i am enclosing my updated resume for your record and consider the same if there is any suitable opportunity in any of the organisation.
Thanking you.
praful shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cleship training and post qualification i use to leading a statutory audit depart...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
... audit department. Now I am looking for an opportunities in the field of either statutory audit ...
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Line 10, column 28, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...etary term. In my earlier organisation i was managing 10-15 employee team along ...
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Line 10, column 233, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
... type of due diligence. I was a part of the our organisation standardization committee ...
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Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rk for good documentation. With this i am enclosing my updated resume for your...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Praful
...f the organisation. Thanking you. praful shah
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04484304933 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38012497209 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3902533444 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150762937253 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561869604437 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618616470407 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444824397841 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517516808193 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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