Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
" A person should never make an important decision alone
During our live we have to make important decisions that sometimes define our future. Sometimes we do not have a person who support us and we have to take them alone. As a result, we make mistakes or we just simply do not take the better choice. I believe that is better ask for a help when this happen, so for me is better not to take decisions alone. I think this way for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, there are opportunities in our live that we can let them go. However, we lose them because we do not have a guidance or a person who support ourselves. My person is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, when I was in high school, my mon died from a heart attack. At that time, I was twenty-three years old and I did not know how to deal with that situation. During that period, I was in my last year of school where I had to take final decisions about the career that I had to choose. I was disorientated and I decided that I will not continue studying. Consequently, I could not graduate from high school and neither finish my studies. Now I realize that we must have a person in our lives that helps us to take significant decision.
Second, there are decisions that even seems easy to takes are difficult, even when we have a short age, that our experience is not enough. As a result, we have to request help from a person who report us benefits and rewards. For example, my brother is twenty years old. Every time he has to take a decision about his life, school he asks my father. Last year he had a soccer championship in the university. He asks my father some help to improve his techniques, because my dad is a professional soccer player. At the end of the competition he felt satisfied because my dad helps him to take significant decisions during the game.
In conclusion, we always should ask someone for help. Making decisions alone it is not a good advice. We can make errors that could cost us our future and our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will explain in the following essay. First of all, there are opportunities in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...significant decisions during the game. In conclusion, we always should ask some...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good advice'.
Suggestion: good advice
... help. Making decisions alone it is not a good advice. We can make errors that could cost us ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, so, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31117021277 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53034855672 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470744680851 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4392316096 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5416666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118307337493 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411453670517 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455801572024 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886209622227 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374692177986 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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