Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.To what extent do you agree with this definition of scuccess should take in to consideration?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , accomplishment
It is matter of concern that,accomplishment is not a richness of this society and i...
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Suggestion: , correcting
... society and it also composed of failure,correcting the mistakes,attitude,confidence and po...
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Suggestion: , attitude
...posed of failure,correcting the mistakes,attitude,confidence and positive vibes.This essa...
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...,attitude,confidence and positive vibes.This essay will discuss the value of success...
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... of life and community. To begin with,a person is succeeding in his life becaus...
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... of failure in every preliminary tenure.For instance,Jack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopp...
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...in every preliminary tenure.For instance,Jack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopping company,He...
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...ack Ma is a tycoon of e-shopping company,He has attended hundreds of interviews in ...
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...ndreds of interviews in his life finally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the...
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...finally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the is owner of one of the reputatio...
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...ally,he has failed in all interviews.Now,he the is owner of one of the reputation o...
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...cessary in all stages of own experience.An effort we have put in our ambition that...
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Suggestion: , another
... step to succeed in society. To ahead,another vital point is behaviour,self-esteem an...
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Suggestion: , self-esteem
...o ahead,another vital point is behaviour,self-esteem and positive vibration.We are putting h...
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...iour,self-esteem and positive vibration.We are putting hundred percent of attitude...
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Suggestion: a hundred
...m and positive vibration.We are putting hundred percent of attitude at work that shows ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e at work that shows us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence d...
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Suggestion: , whenever
...k that shows us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence during at ...
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... us right direction.Secondly,whenever,we lose our self-confidence during at work ...
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...nfidence during at work or any other job,we have to think positive to achieve a goa...
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...ink positive to achieve a goal. Moreover,we have to keep-on follow our plan unless ...
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Suggestion: Finally
...follow our plan unless we reach our aim.Finally,every successful person drops out their...
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...our plan unless we reach our aim.Finally,every successful person drops out their colle...
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...om wealthy family. To put in nutshell,in the current scenario,many people ponder...
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... put in nutshell,in the current scenario,many people ponder,every accomplish comes fr...
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... the current scenario,many people ponder,every accomplish comes from highness that is ...
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...sh comes from highness that is not true.It is purely from failure,self-motivation ...
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Suggestion: , self-motivation
...at is not true.It is purely from failure,self-motivation and positive vibration etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6038647343 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46094919042 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6579400651 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.333333333 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0375911656191 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188788226555 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257735376953 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251232065692 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280914088698 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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