Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are opposing views regarding whether the government should not invest its funding in cultural activities or supporting these activities can provide the population and the culture with many benefits. In my opinion, while the former is true for underdeveloped areas, the latter is more appropriate for developed ones.
In areas suffering from poverty and starvation, it is significantly beneficial for the economy if the government focuses on increasing its investment in new methods of production instead of art and culture. With such innovations, financial pressure put on local businesses and low-income farmers will be reduced, which facilitates the economic development. A case in point is that after applying advanced land reclamtion measures, northern mountainous provinces of Viet Nam, which usually suffer from soil erosion, has increased agricultural productivity and achieved a significant reduction in the poverty rate.
As for wealthy areas, the population and the culture can gain many benefits if government funding is used to support cultural activities. For the residents, these are tools to promote social cohesion – the bond between people. In the other words, not only do art and culture provide entertainment but they also strengthen the community relations. On the other hand, such activities preserve a country’s featured culture. This can be explified by Quan Ho folk songs, which were born in the 11th century and has been conserved and promoted by their taking place in Bac Ninh every year.
In conclusion, while focusing on investing in economic aspects instead of cultural activities in poor areas can improve the economy effectively, the use of government funding in art and culture in wealthy ones will help conserve the unique culture and strengthen the community bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... folk songs, which were born in the 11th century and has been conserved and promo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, while, as for, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49642857143 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00806526403 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.045962507 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31799602848 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11257082598 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756810327669 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18887191128 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792013229595 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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