Hey Lisa,
Hope this letter finds you well.Do you remember last week we were planning going for a picnic in the country side? May be its difficult from your home, but don't worry. I have made all of our arrangements from picking you up from your home and all things that we are going to be needed like i made a list of things which include tent,torch,logs,sleeping bed and the most important is a camera which i have packed first.one more thing, I am getting my cousin with me as, she is very used to it and she will help us as a guide.
For you, there are some things that you got to get along with you like mostly our eatables made with extra cheese, barbecue pans and my headphones which you took from me. I have got a plan as it is near my grandmother's house,firstly we are going to her house, where we will see how to plant rice plants then secondly, we are going to a farm with lots of cattle including Spain cow's which are very much attractive.Finally we will make a campfire near our tent.
Hope you will be ready and make all the required arrangements for our plan.
yours lovingly,
Joanna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
... Lisa, Hope this letter finds you well.Do you remember last week we were planning...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ay be its difficult from your home, but dont worry. I have made all of our arrangeme...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ngs that we are going to be needed like i made a list of things which include ten...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , torch
...made a list of things which include tent,torch,logs,sleeping bed and the most importan...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sleeping
... of things which include tent,torch,logs,sleeping bed and the most important is a camera ...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , firstly
...plan as it is near my grandmothers house,firstly we are going to her house, where we wil...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ain cows which are very much attractive.Finally we will make a campfire near our tent. ...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ain cows which are very much attractive.Finally we will make a campfire near our tent. ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... required arrangements for our plan. yours lovingly, Joanna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34134615385 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74777596323 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.499801219 44.8134815571 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.0 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238196628806 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123507802166 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404255176071 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172159491188 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270993608433 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.