Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are opposing views regarding whether the government should not invest its funding in cultural activities or supporting these activities can provide more benefits in terms of social values. In my opinion, while the former is true for underdeveloped areas, the latter is more suitable for developed ones.
In areas suffering from poverty and starvation, it is significantly beneficial to the economy if the government focuses on new methods of food production instead of art and culture. With such innovations, financial pressure put on local businesses and low-income farmers will be reduced, which also facilitates economic development. A case in point is that after receiving governmental fundings in advanced land reclamation measures, northern mountainous provinces of Viet Nam where soil erosion used to be prevalent, has increased their agricultural productivity and achieved a significant reduction in the poverty rate. As a result, it can be seen that art and culture are not of top importance regarding these countries.
As for wealthy areas, however, societal aspects can be well promoted and preserved if government offers a dedicated financial support to cultural activities. For the community, they are tools to promote social cohesion – the bond between people. In the other words, not only do art and culture provide entertainment but they also strengthen the community relations. On the other hand, such activities preserve the long-standing unique and valuable culture which apparently is the pride of a country. This can be exemplified by Quan Ho folk songs - a genre of Vietnamese traditional theatrical music, which were born in the 11th century and has been well conserved and promoted by the government as well as Bac Ninh's local council every year.
In conclusion, while focusing on investing in economic aspects instead of cultural activities in poor areas is an effective tactic to improve the economy, wealthy countries can utilise government funding in art and culture as a way to appreciate culture and strengthen the community bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se government funding in art and culture as a way to appreciate culture and stren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, while, as for, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4427244582 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05508164426 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4042230083 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297677295061 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999871767303 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509958128862 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169891734044 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458807224729 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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