Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The world is changing very fast and the main reason for that is a human activity. people always improve everything that can make their life easier and healthier. If we take a look on people’s health, particularly, it advanced dramatically in half of the century. The length of humans’ life increased significantly from 35 to 65 years, and it keeps growing. From that point, it is undeniable that to maintain a good health nowadays is easier than it was in the past. I will broach some reasons that validate my opinion.
To begin with, technological progress and scientific discoveries are the main causes of such a significant enhancement of human longevity. The health organizations in different countries around the world do everything to boost up the availability of medications and vaccinations to eliminate the epidemic of variety diseases. our generation didn’t have to deal with smallpox or polio; those diseases take thousands of lives away. some people might argue that our generation is fighting different diseases pretty harsh one like cancer or Ebola viruses, but considering modern technology and recent advancement in medicine, the humanity is on the right path of finding treatments to those illnesses. With our technology and today’s science, human beings will eradicate those sicknesses; inevitably, it just takes time to find the solution.
What’s more, the society tends to show the importance of the care about a human health today. Anyone can find hundreds of articles and books about diets, gurus of healthy lifestyles, a lot of information is being provided on the internet how to keep fit, it is sort of bandwagon. The array of diets, food supplements, physical activities, sports, and promotion of avoiding the deleterious habits bring the profound impact on human’s health. people began to take care of their healthiness; they prefer more advantageous habits for themselves in order to get a long and enjoyable life. this kind of appropriate attitude to own life span improves it drastically. Of course, some people will say that it is hard to keep this fast life in balance, but I strongly disagree with that opinion. Many people have successful life and their health is one of the firsts to put on the table because it is obvious that health is a primary factor in any kind of success.
In the other words, the human life has been extremely refined, its quality allows live longer, accessibility of medicine and propaganda of the healthy lifestyle helps to sustain healthiness in all extents. You can see the main reasons shown above which strongly support my position.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-01-19 | theverywho | 80 | view |
| 2019-05-19 | alicegreen13 | 90 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on young children’s education than on university education 76
- It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing: it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fall. Do agree with that idea? 70
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they respond to the specific points made in the reading passage 80
- Some companies decide not to permit employees to reply the e mail or text associated with the work in the holiday or on the weekend Some people think that this policy will improve the satisfaction of the employees While others argue that banning the reply 67
- Which way would you like to change to improve your health: the kind of food you eat，or the amount of exercise，the mount of stress 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...in reason for that is a human activity. people always improve everything that can make...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...inate the epidemic of variety diseases. our generation didn't have to deal wit...
^^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... diseases take thousands of lives away. some people might argue that our generation ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...profound impact on human's health. people began to take care of their healthiness...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...order to get a long and enjoyable life. this kind of appropriate attitude to own lif...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, kind of, of course, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17056074766 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97395582811 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577102803738 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1151369566 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.65 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13770539991 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459098361738 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761763030686 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842490862611 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053609372343 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.