The following table gives statistics showing the aspect of quality of life in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares and contrasts the differences in the data about the living standard in the five countries, including Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, and the USA in 1982. Generally speaking, quality of life in the USA was the highest among the five selected countries with top GDP at 13160 US dollars per head.
It can be seen from the table that Bolivia, Egypt, and Indonesia possessed a similar level of indicators. Egypt had the highest living standard amongst the three with 690 US dollars and 2950 calorie per head. However, its infant mortality was pretty lower than Bolivia’s at 97 per 1000 live births compared to 124 in Bolivia.
Meanwhile, Bangladesh experienced the lowest quality of life in all the indicators. Its GDP was one hundred times smaller than the USA’s. In the same manner, the figures for daily calorie supply and life expectancy at birth were about half those of the USA. Conversely, its infant mortality rate was the greatest amongst the five at 132 per 1000 live births.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'calorie' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'calories'.
Suggestion: calories
... the three with 690 US dollars and 2950 calorie per head. However, its infant mortality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64669932199 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3136633563 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915970918323 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425124525373 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407770319647 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733236539153 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523244426137 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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