International tourism has become cheaper than before, so more and more countries open their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Globalized world has brought many unprecedented changes for the people wherein tourism plays a vital role for many nations as well as now people can easily travel on account of affordability. However, there are several advantages and disadvantages which associate with tourism.
To begin with, earlier, it was very difficult to travel from one country to another country owing to various reasons such as expensiveness and so on. But, now traveling is possible for almost everyone which in turn bring myriad advantages. Firstly, tourism generates huge employment for the local people, thereby it helps to root out poverty which brings better lifestyle for the local people. Furthermore, tourism allows local people to interact with people of different mindsets, cultures, values and so on, which is a milestone for moulding personality of someone in a better way. Secondly, tourism acts a thread which binds nations whereby harmony and relations between countries flourish by leaps and bounds.In addition, tourism has proved as a bedrock for many nation's economies. For instance, Thailand is the country, whose economy is mostly dependent on tourism.
On the contrary, tourism exhibits manifold disadvantages. Very first, tourism is a major cause of conflict for nations because many a time, it has been found that tourists do not respect local culture, tradition, and due to economical tourism, there is an influx of tourists on a large extent which again intervene in the values of society and thereby tourism may obliterate harmony and relations between countries. Lastly, affordability of international tourism brings temptation for many people to travel in different parts of the world, and thus create imbalance of resources by exploiting various things.
In conclusion, tourism provides many valuable things for people, but there should be certain rules and regulation. Here, the advantages outweigh disadvantages here.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52542372881 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86510672423 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6921024058 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0522047011893 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294002833076 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468836835982 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432761140174 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213000594017 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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