Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Change is an inevitable process of human's life whereby people overcome their shortfalls and upgrade themselves with respect to time. However, it has been noticed that many people prefer to spend their time in doing only one thing, while others are in favour of change. Thus, I am going to discuss both views of this statement.
To begin with, people become conversant and versatile with the help of experiences, which they get in all walks of life, which in turn make them capable and cognizant to cope with myriad situations easily. Therefore, people like to do the same work in their whole life on account of manifold reasons. Firstly, consistency and dedication are needed in order to get expertise in any realm, therefore it is crucial for someone to remain only in one domain because learning about one thing results fruitful outcome for people in terms of financial gain, reputation and so on. Secondly, indulgence in mere one work makes people more skilled and experienced, thereby people can make their stronghold in their respective work, which is imperative for securing the future. For instance, It has been found that success comes to those, who have a strong foothold in terms of knowledge, experience and so on, in one field, rather than those people who become jack of all.
However, change is an incessant phenomenon, whereby people embrace various essential things in their personality, which make people to change with respect to time owing to plethora possible reasons. First and foremost, alteration in life in terms of work and so on, allows people to get an exposure of several things, which make people to enjoy their work whole heartedly. In addition, no change with time may breed boredom and monotonous situation in someone's life, which may prove fatal for the growth of an individual. Furthermore, in this competitive era, change in work has become a general mode to get promotion, thereby people embrace change.
In conclusion, I opine that change is necessary, but one should use it for his/her elevation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 31.9359605911 182% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 334.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04491017964 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61444456381 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8551666259 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.25397266985 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193270677142 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824414769538 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544527758169 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129965075223 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061871840957 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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