Today in this world, we see daily a high number of people apply jobs where experience and qualifications matters most.while, some people and I believe that personal qualities of a person is also an important factor that must be considered.
Undue the fact that job requirement involves highly skilled and experienced employees like in an IT department and engineering colleges require experienced people because there is complete exposure to heavy machines.
Though, there are organisations asking for personal qualities rather than additional skills which do not require training such as Honesty, on time work completion, overtime work for the firm. For example, Reliance industry appoints people with their qualities rather than qualification as these skills cannot be trained.
Finally I conclude that, personal qualities gives a different level to business organisation with employees working with unity but experienced employee also place a different position.
- Some people prefer to live in hot climates, where as other love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer. 73
- Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degrees Do you agree or disagree 69
- Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop1- ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.2- Ask what the prices are3- how long they will be able to hold the goods f 67
- It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be.Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.Include any relevant examples from your experience 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...illed and experienced employees like in an IT department and engineering colleges req...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...n as these skills cannot be trained. Finally I conclude that, personal qualities giv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78472222222 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97785518919 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2698269382 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.6 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160135295418 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849792132298 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439651150601 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874952146636 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531730724235 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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