few individual believe that product with uniqueness is only key to make successful business. which extent you agree?
In business world,some people believe that product with uniqueness is only key to make successful business. Nevertheless,i believe that there are many other factors which are responsible for success of a company.
Firstly,unique attributes have great impact rather than unique product.For instance,many mobile companies launch mobile with some common features but people prefer only mobile which have some differences in terms of camera,software,memory etc.
On the other side,there are some other reasons are responsible.Firstly In spite of productivity,marketing strategies are also effective enormously.One clear example is sale.Because of significant discount people can not stop their self to buy more and more things which are some time unusual for them.Secondly,maintainance after product is needed.Thirdly,price has great impact on product For instance,two different companies have same type of product but price is different then one should prefer product with low price.
Last but not least,quality and quantity also responsible for success rate. Quality and quantity assurance team should main two factors in product Particularly food companies.Despite price,people also check quantity of product as well as they assure quality after using that product.And if and only if they find product with good quality,then only they dare to buy product second time.
To conclude,success of a company does not depends only on uniqueness of product but marketing,creativity,price,quality and quantity which have great impact on product. So that great product can make a successful company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99565217391 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.27341763682 2.80592935109 152% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.528810746 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.375 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306933775636 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177672770353 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123461050238 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212389614932 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125115409478 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.11 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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