the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and woman do physical activity in 2010.
the bar chart depicts the data about daily exercise which has been done by several age groups of two gender in year 2010 in Australia .The unit of measurement is 'percentage'.Overall, women of age 35 to 64 did more exercise;however,at the same time ratio for men is differ because it was reached a peak for 15 to 24 age group .
Firstly,male had a highest number of percentage for age group 15 to 24 by 52.8% which is decline slightly by 42.2 and 39.5 for age group 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 respectively .Furthermore,there was a tiny rise which is followed by 43.1, 45.1 and 46.7 for age cluster of 45 to 54, 55 to 64, and 65 and over.
secondly, for women of 15 to 24 years old, percentage was 47.1,then it increased a bit by about 52.5%.Hence it remained steady for 35 to 64 which was on the top then other groups.For 65 and above women the ratio was 46.7 which was almost similar of same age group men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25581395349 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98291659953 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.2807651353 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 244.0 112.824112599 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.3333333333 22.9334400587 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.6666666667 5.23603664747 452% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615691758334 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476958737014 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283010423711 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476958737014 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283010423711 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.2329268293 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.32 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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