In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in
the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today, more and more people tend to live by themselves. Although this tendency has some drawbacks, in my opinion, it is the positive development of modern society.
We can not refuse that living alone will be harder for personal and economic reasons. Firstly, they have to divide reasonable their budget which pays for foods, the electric and fresh water monthly bills. Therefore, to have enough money for study and entertainment, they must spare economically their money for these purposes. Secondly, in the viewpoint of personal, if they get sick or illness, and nobody knows about it, living alone people have to take care or go to the medical centers by themselves. For example, two months ago, my older brother who ate some rotten eggs and got a fever and vomiting, he has to drive to the local doctor alone although he felt very exhausted.
Besides, this tendency has some positive sides for some special careers in developing society. When people live alone, they will have freedom about their time. For instance, a surgeon has a night shift and usually have to stay late in the hospital, they can go emergency room whatever they want and do not affect their roommates’sleeping. Furthermore, a one-person household will have precious silent space and do not be disturbed by others. Therefore, it will advantage for the people who love to research.
In conclusion, people are converting to live alone today. While this changing has some negative sides, I believe that it also has some benefits for a growing society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81654910588 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4567006322 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210093401301 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881549353924 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676820892828 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172565542341 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735870684127 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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