the graph below shows the quantities trasported in the uk between 1974 and 2002 by different mode of transport.sumerised the main information and by selecting main features where comparasion possible.
The given line graph depicts the amount of goods transported in the unites kingdom between 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of transportation in million tonnes.A glance at the graph reveals that commodities transportation through road was highest in all mention ways.which fluctuate greatly through this period of thirty years.But pipeline transport observed least.
Firstly,movement of material through road remain highest through out with respect to rest of ways.In 1974 was seventy million tonnes but in following years increased more lessly till 1990.and then decreased abruptly for four years after that raised up to one hundred million tones.
However,transmission by pipeline was always least with comparison other modes.First started in 1978 and increased gradually till 2002 but reached almost twenty million tonnes.Although,transportation through rail and water started from forty million tonnes but water transport increased while through rail decreased in successive years till 1998.But rail which started from forty million end up also same quantities.On the other hand water transport increased up to twenty five million tone in thirty years.
In short movement of goods through roads remained all time favorite mode and through pipeline was least one.transport through rail and water did not increase considerable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ur different modes of transportation in million tonnes.A glance at the graph reveals th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...des of transportation in million tonnes.A glance at the graph reveals that commod...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'commodities'' or 'commodity's'?
Suggestion: commodities'; commodity's
...nnes.A glance at the graph reveals that commodities transportation through road was highest...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...tly through this period of thirty years.But pipeline transport observed least. Fir...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , movement
...eline transport observed least. Firstly,movement of material through road remain highest...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'remain the highest'.
Suggestion: remain the highest
...rstly,movement of material through road remain highest through out with respect to rest of way...
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...of material through road remain highest through out with respect to rest of ways.In 1974 wa...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Suggestion: , transmission
...p to one hundred million tones. However,transmission by pipeline was always least with compa...
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Suggestion: First
...lways least with comparison other modes.First started in 1978 and increased gradually...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ut reached almost twenty million tonnes.Although,transportation through rail and water s...
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Suggestion: , transportation
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Suggestion: But
...decreased in successive years till 1998.But rail which started from forty million e...
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Suggestion: On
...rty million end up also same quantities.On the other hand water transport increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, in short, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78172588832 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35301378393 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.4926829268 218% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.972557914 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.75 112.824112599 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.25 22.9334400587 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 5.23603664747 482% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974375920316 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698410653025 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658080382252 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698410653025 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658080382252 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.2329268293 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 61.2550243902 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 11.4140731707 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.9970731707 196% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.