When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless
to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
technology is taking over the every expect of life.Due to technological developments in country traditional skills and way of living change in such a way that its looks like die out.it is hopeless for struggling to stay them alive.I tollaly disagree with this point of view because technology creat a new and efficient way to deal with traditional skill in lessen time.In this essay we are going to discuss the limitation associated with archaic methods and benefits of new developmental techniques.
Although,many argued that modern developments decrease the jobs of people.many job which have been the trade mark of some specific experts can be made by use of technology.some artisans and pottery making which in past had been best known from some specific skilled forced.In Australia patrol station has been automated by robotics.people has become more and more screen oriented their interactions are negligible.However they think that people are living in nut shell their life and now a day it's very difficult to regain that environment again.
However,I disagree with type of arguments that technology is more time efficent.the work which has be done by many people now is easily performed by technology.For instantenously time of traveling is incredibly lessen.secondly,technology is yield effective .for example use of technology new and better yield of animals and crops are being introduced that is decreasing the global poverty.In past it was quit expensive to hire large amount of labour and train them for specific work.As a consequently people get more time to spend with friends and family.
In this we discussed the beneficial uses of technology with strong agreement with improvement in science does not affect the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32727272727 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31626395384 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.4926829268 302% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.099936116 43.030603864 409% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.25 112.824112599 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 22.9334400587 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.23603664747 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211130180989 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130923895815 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103722823195 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130923895815 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103722823195 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.2329268293 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 61.2550243902 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.3012195122 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.06136585366 139% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.4329268293 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.9970731707 266% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.