Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
It is irrefutable that most of the upper-class jobs are performed by men category. Some people think that a law enforcement agency should quota some post for the women category only. In my opinion, that is must especially in the developing nations where females are bound to perform home duties only.
One of the important factors is women empowerment. Which is equally important to bring the balance in the society, moreover it will encourage people to educate their girl child and the man-woman ratio will be maintained in society. However, it has been observed that most men are dominating in the developing nations and they are considered to be the only way of income. On the other side, a woman is suppressed to do home jobs and even girls are not allowed to take higher education in rural regions. Therefore, reserving some post for women only will prohibit such cultures and leads to equality.
Another predominant factor is the balance in the society at the workplace, by means of it, ladies will be similarly treated and respected in the community against men. Moreover, job security will make them more independent and confident to live with dignity in their place. In addition to that, it has been studied that organizations with an equal ratio of man and woman are more successful. Such companies carry almost the same ratio of the task force and engage them more in their duties. Competition between opposite sex results in a better outcome, thus favouring the profit for the organization.
In conclusion, most of the high-rank workforce includes males only and females are kept isolated to perform house duties like making food and cleaning house only. Hence, the authorities required more focus inequality between sexes to bring the balance in society and make women feel confident and independent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03642384106 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68118085131 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5469157383 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197534625975 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608345016763 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496179246457 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111239101467 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474716118611 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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