Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some of the languages will be forgotten every year. Many people believe that this is a good phenomenon because it makes communications easier. I agree with this opinion and I think it is useful for the relationship between people in all of the world.
Today, there are many transportation vehicles that can transfer people from a place in the world to another place at the least time. People can travel between countries very easily while there are many communication problems in these travels. If there is a general language that all of the people of the world can understand it, relationships become very simple.
Generally, learning a new language needs some skills that many people do not have them. furthermore, it needs much time too. If a person wants to learn a new language, she/he has to exercise very much and it wastes time and energy. For example, when a student takes a decision to study abroad, at the first step should learn the language of the destination country whereas she/he can spend this time for the lectures or other more important things.
Through, many researchers found that learning a new language improves memorize and it avoids many brain illness such as Alzheimer. Moreover, each language is related to culture, therefore it is possible that when a language dies out, a culture dies out too. Thus, I think it is a good solution that we have some institutes for teaching different languages and people learn languages there as an optional activity.
To sum up, I agree it is very wonderful that all of the people speak in a general language but we have to be careful save cultures that are related to any languages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the languages will be forgotten every year....
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... for the relationship between people in all of the world. Today, there are many transpo...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ls. If there is a general language that all of the people of the world can understand it, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ills that many people do not have them. furthermore, it needs much time too. If a person wa...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...m up, I agree it is very wonderful that all of the people speak in a general language but ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ures that are related to any languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84154929577 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67480280129 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7959671054 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324412793907 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12015767875 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940072086958 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193690412899 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133780031373 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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