Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients on how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?
For the past few decades, with an enormous enhancement in people’s living standard, individuals have paid more attention to health care at a significantly increasing rate. Therefore, it is suggested that doctors should take the responsibility of spreading knowledge of health care for their patients. In my point of view, while I agree with this motion, I believe teachers and the media also play a crucial role in helping people improve their health.
At the outset, there is no denying that as a highly respected profession, it is integral for doctors to take steps to educate people about healthcare. Initially, that doctors have to go through a rigorously recognized education process to ensure high qualifications in medial workforce has made doctors the most trustworthy ones to give health care advices. They have deep disciplinary knowledge to help their patients pull through their illnesses more rapidly as well as make a contribution to stimulate people improve their health. Furthermore, working in hospitals, clinics, etc on a daily basis makes it much easier for doctors to help their patients instill the momentousness of a healthy lifestyle.
In addition to that, it is also crucial for schools along with media to fulfill their responsibility to help people take measures with the aim of intensifying their life expectation. First and foremost, the education system needs to provide students with lessons which give them information about health care, some illnesses and how to avoid them. As a result, students are likely to be conscious of taking care of themselves from an early age. Apart from that, more health programs and podcasts should be broadcast on national and local media, which can raise people’s awareness of some health problems and probably will diminish the possibility of outbreaks related to some infectious diseases.
To encapsulate, I believe that only doctors but the whole society ought to engage in boosting the national health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...engage in boosting the national health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31746031746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96318895586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4813914726 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.583333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416235052413 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143557727561 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079345297124 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225538820315 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925454937314 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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