Computers are increasingly used in education. In what areas are computers more important than teachers. And in what areas are teachers more important than computers.
Answer
The use of computers in education is increasing at an unprecedented rate. However, there are some areas that the role of an instructor is indispensable and also some fields in which computers are regarded as a better choice. My following essay will discuss this motion in both sides.
Initially, at the advent of artificial intelligence, a computer is capable of providing students with the most suitable learning programs when they study science and technology. In terms of knowledge there is no denying that the computers connected to internet can provide a wide range of courses which are much more useful. Not only do students can choose the courses that suit their own needs and their capacities but also they have chances to get access with the most up to date knowledge as well as many leading experts in the tech world via a well designed program. Furthermore, in respect to skills, it is highly likely that the use of computers in teaching science and technology will bring positive outcome. Contrary to the conventional teaching method, working with computers give students opportunities to practice what they have learned along with stimulate them to figure out other problems while studying by themselves.
Nonetheless, the role of teachers is vital and becomes mandatory when it comes to complex math that requires human interaction and collaboration as well as motivating students to study. Initially, a computer can only identify the answer of students is true or false but it is incapable of finding out students’ mistakes and then representing important concepts in a clearer way. In general, all aspects including reasoning and critical thinking must be taught by teachers who can give an understandable explanation for students. Furthermore, evaluating and assessing students’ performances and their shortcomings are all crucial parts which should be taken over by teachers. Therefore, they can follow the progresses of their students, give them sensible advice when they encounter a problem. Last but not least, teachers are the ones playing the most pivotal part in inspiring students, motivate them to further their studying. A teacher can make students take an interest in a subject or find their potentialities and encourage them to equip themselves with more valuable knowledge.
To recapitulate, it is necessary to have both computers and teachers in the teaching and studying environment so that the country will have a potential and highly qualified generation in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Answer The use of computers in education is inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, in general, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33416458853 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02719107371 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551122194514 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6602603475 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6875 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168306080951 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053443655526 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413284383466 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981196470112 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270310203845 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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