The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
The line graph depicts the growth of population for both nation India and China between 2000 and 2050.
It is clear that, population in both countries namely China and India experienced an increased throughout the period from 2000 to 2500. But the notably data was that trend for population in India will go downside from 2030, till 2050.
As the graph shows, Total population figure accounted for about 1000 billion in China while India had higher population growth began from 2000 with you experienced a rise to above 1300 million till now while India followed the same pattern and the figure represented at above 1400 billion.
By contrast, The prediction shows that for both country population will stand at same position at 1450 billion times in 2030. But afterwards, the growth of population for India will witness a decline till 2050 and end up at only 1400 billion compared to China, it will have reverse trend, pattern for popular will continue go up gradually. Lastly, it is predicted that the figure will reached to its peaks at 1600 billion in 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91712707182 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39817192773 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3973982081 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426573196678 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220638099894 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906074060358 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296747781811 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668874843353 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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