As a part of class assignment you have to write about the following topic.
- What difficulties will your country face in the next ten years?
- How can these problems be overcome?
Looking to the present scenario of the world, the India is fastest developing country. The government should take some actions to overcome all the hindrances which obstacle India’s growth. This is essay elaborate the challenges and difficulties which will face India in coming ten years.
Though there are so many of factors which affects the Country’s growth. The industrial revolution and globalization are the main reasons behind it. As ten years ago, the country did not aware about the global warming as compare to now everyone knows the meaning. The effect of climate change is also part of Global warming and this is because of Industries which are continues to operate the fossil fuels. Therefore, it invites the more natural disasters like earthquake, flood, and raise in sea level. In addition to this, the expansions of cities are going to dead the forest area. Government should introduce strong policy related to development of forest also the government should allocate a special amount of fund for re growing the tress and forest. In addition to this, the industrialization is made people to migrate to cities. In coming years the cities will overflow with population and the cities will expand numerously.
Additionally, the agriculture method in India is deviated from natural way of farming. The farmers should adopt the method of organic farming. Government has to arrange the on site training to farmers in which farmers are easily understand the method of farming without pesticides. As a matter of fact, presently in India the entire agriculture product has the pesticides and people eat the pesticides in food in routines.
In view of above, the government should educate the citizens of India on minimal consumption of product which polluted the environment and bring awareness about these issues which will face in upcoming ten years. Also every citizen has equal responsibilities in making the world better place to live. If we take all the above action timely, the problem can be mitigate to considerable level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... to farmers in which farmers are easily understand the method of farming without pesticide...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... which will face in upcoming ten years. Also every citizen has equal responsibilitie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, as to, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22356495468 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8300949922 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552870090634 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4812972752 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127751546205 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344218216339 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485735254585 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760877551954 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480890569215 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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