You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that I forgot my wallet at your place and I request you to send me back through one of my friend.
First of all, I thank you for your kind efforts and best hospitality that you offered me. You organized the vacation very appropriately, we covered the famous attractions, enjoyed the delicious food and even spent time for cooking and watching movie. The time flew so fast, the whole week passed just like a day. I will always remember the time spent with you during last week. I enjoyed a lot.
This Morning when I returned home, I planned to some online shopping but was unable to found my purse anywhere then I noticed that I forgot my wallet at your place. Actually last night, before going to bed, I kept my wallet on your side table and I forgot to pick that up in the morning. My wallet includes my driving license and all debit cards.
Coincidentally, my friend, Ryan is also in Buffalo, Newyork for some official work. It would be great if you could give my wallet to him by meeting him at a mutually decided place. His contact number is 401-856-8779, You could contact him and give my reference, I had already discussed my situation to him.
Sorry for the inconvenience but it is really urgent and a necessity for me otherwise I would not have bothered you.
Thanking you

Warm Regards
Harry.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, incidentally, really, so, then, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 32.9175257732 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50381679389 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48504940467 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7328008486 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368091986149 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126010578032 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863988225683 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194624880519 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752474583719 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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