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The line graph and table illustrate the temperatures per month and quantity of sunshine in hours in London, Sydney and New York. Overall, New York and Sydney have twice more sunshine hours than London. In London and New York the temperature is on its lowest levels in winter, whereas is Sydney winter is the warmest period of the year.
The data of the line graph shows that New York with 2535 annual sunshine and London with slighly more than thousand hours have nearly 5-10 grades in January. It develops gradually and peaks at about 22-30 in July, afterwards declining over the next 6 months and reaching again to the level of 5-10.
As for Sydney, it can be observed that although it has roughly the same number of sun hours (2473) as New York, the warmest periods of year for this city are January and December with 25 degree, similar to London’s summer period. The lowest temberature in Sydney is recorded in mid-summer (July) with slighly over 15.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...shine and London with slighly more than thousand hours have nearly 5-10 grades in Januar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33330296385 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4612195051 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123612121586 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698139916577 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111923644791 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918322883879 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664873823727 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.