Nowadays, many families have bothparents working. Some working parents believe otherfamily members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, modern families are faced to a lot of problems as finance, house, monthly bills etc. With dual-income families having young children, the difficulty is finding someones could look after their kids. It is belief that members of family like grandparents can do this job well. However, in this modern and busy life, i believe that nursery schools can also provide their kid with best care.
It is convenient and feeling secure with having a family members as caretakers. A familiar face to children can make the job a lot easier. The aunt, or the grandmothers could persuade a child who refuse to eat., calm a cry baby who has not been exposed to strangers or feel unwell. Moreover, this assured about if their children are mistreated by nanny or staff at some nursery school. The next benefit of getting childcare from family members is to reduce economic pressure on parents who do not earn well. Because the family members are willing job for free or taking lower price than nursery service. This allowed saving to be used for other purpose.
However, because of long distance for transporting, parent have no family members to rely on, they have no choice but to send their kids to childcare service. The first reason that we should believe these services is a reliable center only recruits well-trained staff to manage the young children. For instance, the professional staff know how to deal with mischievous, less disciplined children. Secondly, at reputable centers, the children are classified according to age, this method help them to have good management of the children. In addition, the staff can easily organize appropriate activities for specific age group. And they will equip classrooms with the right toys that help boost children's mental and physical development.
In conclusion, kindergartens can also provide good care and even educational services for young children of dual-income families. Because they have a good educational environment which supply multi-skills background for children, help kids get the independence and disciplined. This will clearly help parents to feel secure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... However, in this modern and busy life, i believe that nursery schools can also p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74589140195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6963720321 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231153086496 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704927495019 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474845023352 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1480102601 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414545992597 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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