You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait ]
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Hi Sir or Mam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the unsatisfactory response of your branch pertaining to issuing a cheque book.
As a privileged customer of your organisation with client id B42324, I had requested a new cash copy around 15 days back via the online portal but, I am yet to received it for which the issuance tracking details is T492934. On speaking with the support executive, I came to know that order is not validated from the office due to technical challenges.
While opening the account, I was given assurance of all problems and complaints being resolved within 72 working hours. Since it has been more than two weeks, can you please tell me how much time I need to wait more to get it delivered.
Such kind of performance from a reputed bank like yours is not expected. it would be really helpful if you could give a brief on quick action to be taken in regards to this.
yours faithfully
Hari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...eputed bank like yours is not expected. it would be really helpful if you could gi...
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Line 8, column 155, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ive a brief on quick action to be taken in regards to this. yours faithfully Hari
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...tion to be taken in regards to this. yours faithfully Hari
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59171597633 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61553187087 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.757396449704 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8794951721 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231137369828 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794557115474 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664755291066 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129001498147 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721213554054 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.