You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter for not getting my cheque book which I had ordered two weeks ago. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I hold a premium savings account with your bank for nearly a decade and last week I visited your central park branch to order a cheque book. this request for cheque book was placed through the online ticketing kiosk which advised that I would receive the same within three working days.
I would like to inform you that it has been nearly two weeks and I am yet to receive my cheque book despite my regular follow up with your banking team. I would like to know when I can receive my cheque book.
Finally, I would like to highlight that I am disappointed with the support I got from your banking team to resolve this issue. Hence I would request you to look into this matter and provide a response in detail of the action which you will take to resolve this matter.
I look forward to your immediate response on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter for not getting...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ral park branch to order a cheque book. this request for cheque book was placed thro...
^^^^
Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...our banking team to resolve this issue. Hence I would request you to look into this m...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14733756106 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7031557203 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278626488159 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105718970584 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072299997846 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146772293771 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682089141004 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.