You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait ]
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to make an official complain for not getting my ordered cheque book that I have ordered since two weeks.
My company is registered into your VIP list, and they opened for me an account over two years with your bank. I have never had reason to complain before, but the delay for my current request is not acceptable. When I made the request online through the internet banking two weeks ago, I expected to receive the cheque book immediately. However, nothing is received till date.
Normal process of any similar request is only three working days, considering any work-load. It is been two weeks now, and I did not get any feedback. So, please let me know the current status of my request, and how many days to receive it at my address.
I have taken a fast track option for all my services. I would therefore request that you address this matter personally with the customer service department, and that you endure my cheque book is sent to my address.
I look forward to the book being delivered.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y cheque book is sent to my address. I look forward to the book being delivere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44994685227 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3820277684 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256275905322 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083826224076 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669978791343 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137426928852 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724536699812 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.