Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that holidaymakers should regulate within the local culture and social norms, whilst others believe that travelers must welcome warmly with different cultural acts. This essay agrees that visitors should gladly welcome with the culture associated within a country. This essay discusses both points of view.
The foremost reason behind welcoming our guests by own culture is it will encourage people to get interacts with others culture and that spread good knowledge all over the world. Holidaymakers also get experience with various culture and they will teach other people also to follow such types of social values and norms. As a consequence, it empowers brotherhood between the two countries. Incite one example, thousands of tourists come to visit Nepal yearly and learn different Newari, mithali as well as Hindu culture as fact that they often visit Nepal because guests loved the cultural behavior of Nepal.
On the other hand, many disagree and feels that people can learn new things from tourists and it can be fruitful to increase social awareness the way people living in other parts of worlds. If local people also tend to follow the culture of their guests they will get a good family environment with tourists and help to develop mutual understanding. However, in my perspective, such outer culture can lead to detrimental effects on the local culture of people. For instance, in many countries cultural are high effects by western cultures from the way of their habit of food to wearing clothes has the greatest impact because of such culture. As a result, people are giving less important to local customs and behavior. There is no doubt if the western cultures will not stop to practice, the culture of a particular country might be vanished out.
To recapitulate, visitors visit other countries to learn new things and get interaction with different cultures. So, they must be welcome with the traditions that exist commonly in the host countries rather than an emphasis on western cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for instance, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14457831325 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54483672018 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9982312606 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309934584997 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105741248211 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479813473252 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185406989645 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477865132266 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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