Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A discussion has been brought forward that whether private educational institutes should receive financial support from government or not. I believe it will be beneficial for the country and public if finances are given to government schools instead.
There is no comparison between the tuition fees charged between the two types of schools. Firstly, fee that students pay to study in a private school is not affordable by most of the population and hence only the well settled class of the country which is about 40 percent of total population can afford to study there. Which means that private schools already receive funds from the wealthy society of the nation in the form of tuition fee.
Secondly, Education courses and standards match with various foreign country courses, which concludes that majority of people who are studying in private schools, target to go to abroad for higher studies or work experiences. Government will be wasting its financial resources if they help to educate people who want to help another nation from their studies.
In addition to this, there are number of events held in private schools like debating competition or sports gala to polish the student’s confidence and compared to government schools they excel in every field. For instance, during my time at government-funded school we once had a competition with a private school which included numerous activities such as acting, debating, swimming and marathon. The fact is hard to digest that we lost each competition because of lack of funds to do these activities on daily basis.
To sum up, it will not be wrong to say that it is better for the government to fund their own governed schools rather than private ones as the students are weaker in every field of life and can do better with a little more funding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l population can afford to study there. Which means that private schools already rece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02640264026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6858563537 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6674042425 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234830617291 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09178781246 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060232370293 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132210647679 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461380059428 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.