It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays traveling and staying at one place is way to get more experience. As traveller we must get knowledge in the past about surrounded where we stay . there is argument side, however, which discuss here.
On one side, respect for culture where we stay is way to reduce a mistaken what might do in the future so that it is importance to dive in the past by history where we stay or alive. Therefore, we can share what we can do or what we can not do for our children so that it is more crucial to teach them as course of culture in their family before the get in outside. Then this things have possibility to make still alive our culture if someday future expertise of this culture has passed away.
On the other side. It might show Shock culture if there is possibility people where they stay longtime but they never understand what should be obligatory done or avoided, therefore, snowball effect might be created by that situation which children are not taught by their parents for truth about worth of locality in their circle, where it has the biggest occasion to lost because of era, despite of their children have better education rather than their parents but it is not able to be guaranteed if starting their parents it never begin to share it.
Overall, it seems me that where we stay longtime or temporary is obligatory to know worth culture and history of local to reduce potencial mistaken what we might do.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ne place is way to get more experience. As traveller we must get knowledge in the ...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the past about surrounded where we stay . there is argument side, however, which ...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...e past about surrounded where we stay . there is argument side, however, which discus...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a mistaken what might do in the future so that it is importance to dive in the ...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem as course of culture in their family before the get in outside. Then this th...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...amily before the get in outside. Then this things have possibility to make still a...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... make still alive our culture if someday future expertise of this culture has pa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill alive our culture if someday future expertise of this culture has passed awa...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other side. It might show Shock culture if there is possibility people where the...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver understand what should be obligatory done or avoided, therefore, snowball e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... obligatory done or avoided, therefore, snowball effect might be created by tha...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y done or avoided, therefore, snowball effect might be created by that situatio...
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Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... education rather than their parents but it is not able to be guaranteed if start...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begins'?
Suggestion: begins
...teed if starting their parents it never begin to share it. Overall, it seems me tha...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts it never begin to share it. Overall, it seems me that where we stay longtime ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5859375 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38512831426 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51171875 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.872090088 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101430372461 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431515435871 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217237029623 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635804138465 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00937832772479 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ne place is way to get more experience. As traveller we must get knowledge in the ...
^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the past about surrounded where we stay . there is argument side, however, which ...
^^
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...e past about surrounded where we stay . there is argument side, however, which discus...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a mistaken what might do in the future so that it is importance to dive in the ...
^^
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem as course of culture in their family before the get in outside. Then this th...
^^
Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...amily before the get in outside. Then this things have possibility to make still a...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... make still alive our culture if someday future expertise of this culture has pa...
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill alive our culture if someday future expertise of this culture has passed awa...
^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other side. It might show Shock culture if there is possibility people where the...
^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver understand what should be obligatory done or avoided, therefore, snowball e...
^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... obligatory done or avoided, therefore, snowball effect might be created by tha...
^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y done or avoided, therefore, snowball effect might be created by that situatio...
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Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... education rather than their parents but it is not able to be guaranteed if start...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begins'?
Suggestion: begins
...teed if starting their parents it never begin to share it. Overall, it seems me tha...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts it never begin to share it. Overall, it seems me that where we stay longtime ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5859375 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38512831426 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51171875 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.872090088 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101430372461 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431515435871 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217237029623 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635804138465 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00937832772479 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.