the charts below show the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry and services in three countries in 1980 and a prediction to 2020.
Given is the bar charts illustrating how many workers were and will be employed in three distinct fields of a domestic economy in three countries in 1980 and 2020.
It is evident that Country B will still be agriculture-oriented whereas country C and A will be committed to enhancing its service industry until 2020.
Seeing agriculture as the main focus of the economy, country B has seen a remarkable decrease in this category within these four decades. In 1980, as many as 70% of people in Country B had agriculture-related jobs, far higher than that in Country A (just under 20%) and Country C (merely 10%). Though this figure will decline sharply in 2020, but still greater than those in Country A and C, where fewer people will choose to become farmers.
The importance of industry will be less appreciated among all these countries as its statistics are predicted to drop slightly. It is also noticeable that there will be more industrial workers in Country A and B (approximately one-third) compared to Country C (around 15%).
In stark contrast, this period given has witnessed the accelerating significance of services in those nations. In detail, the number of employees working in this section is expected to level up by 20% (from 20% to 40% in County A and from 40% to 60% in Country C) while there will be a marginal increase of 10% in the figure for Country B.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...until 2020. Seeing agriculture as the main focus of the economy, country B has seen a re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7510373444 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95700729634 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2948340479 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.222222222 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251499837768 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999109574941 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740802386451 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155252790252 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659197996252 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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