Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
It is evident that the youth of the current era is any day more potent and even influential than any prior generation. This essay will help to figure out as to, what are the reasons behind this development? And elucidate the influence this rising trend has on relationships between the younger and the older people.
The main reason behind the youth having so much control and impact on each and every aspect of life can be attributed to a liberal upbringing, compared to the youngsters of the past who were not allowed to express their feelings or emotions openly. Infact, their opinions were not even asked before taking major decisions about their life such as, Marriage, higher education or career paths etc. These kind of decisions were indeed imposed on them. Whereas, today’s generation has a free say in and every matter. Be it their wrong or right decision, they are still loved and respected. This kind of autonomous environment has a bearing in making them all the more audacious and powerful. The second reason behind today’s youth being more impactful is because of higher levels of accessible world-class education as well as technological upliftment which promotes easy financial growth in a short period of time. In the present era many CEOs of big companies are far younger than those, of yesteryear. For example, the CEO of snapchat is Evan Spiegal is only twenty-eight years with a net worth of around two billion dollars.
The effect of this power and influence in the hands of the youngsters certainly is far more negative than positive. As there are comparatively only a handful reasons which would prove that so much might in the hands of the younger generation is more beneficial because youngsters being physically robust can influence the world in a right way, but by and large, it can be figured out that with the power coming in, the youth is becoming highly insensitive and even corrupt. Of late many Indian parents have faced the wrath of their children’s growth in power. For demonstration, In India the demand for old age homes has witnessed a visible rise, as so many parents have seen a change in their children’s attitude the moment they become rich and influential. This kind of lack of gratification and indifference, due to children’s dominance seems to have taken a toll of the child and parent relationship.
To summarize, the reason for the youngsters to getting powerful and impactful can be credited to the changing times and even high technological advancement. Although it seems to be creating a rift between two generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, well, whereas, as to, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0069124424 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90031032749 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536866359447 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7616341385 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.368421053 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193565389668 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618721158249 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530610454683 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130747342149 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682354516477 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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