These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the
city.
Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city ) and
suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
The past 50 years have witnessed a remarkable shift of population from rural areas to urban ones, which undoubtedly leads to various consequences. And the goal of this essay is to highlight those negative outcomes and put forward feasible methods to curb this tendency.
It is manifest that the accelerating migration from the countryside to the metropolises gives rise to a number of undesirable effects. Firstly, the massive depopulation in a rural area has huge impacts on its economic prospect. This is because the majority of the population are children and older people, which results in the unavoidable shortage of labour in traditional careers, such as craft, which is put in the brink of extinction. Another alarming consequence is that the overcrowding in large cities could trigger many problems, such as the higher proportion of poverty and joblessness. Take Mumbai, the capital city of India, which has seen a remarkable increase in the number of immigrants recently, as a telling example. This city has encountered an uncontrolled number of pick-pocketing cases and slums, especially in less-affluent regions.
However, the government could take effective solutions to reverse this trend. The most workable method should be to raise barriers to tighten the migration flow to towns and cities. In other words, the residence right in such areas should be solely authorized to a minority of the population, under special supervision. Furthermore, local authorities should issue policies, ensuring an ideal business environment and incentives should also be proposed to encourage young graduates to contribute to their hometown. The government in Ninh Binh, achieving a huge success after rewarding a subsidy of 10 million dong for excellent-degree bachelors returning to work in their homeland, would serve as an example.
In conclusion, though the impacts of rural depopulation might be hardly insurmountable, obstacles as well as motivations should be of great effectiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49511400651 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22068640693 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1134498971 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256053105836 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780257088211 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366002394475 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137048142428 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430375977546 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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