A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions on how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
You should write at least 150 words.
Hello Tom,
Thankyou for accepting my request to look after my pet and flat whilst I will be visiting Thailand with my family. It's been a long time we haven't met and missing the apple pie you made on last get together. I am writing this letter to let you know about a few things which you need to take care.
My pet, Fischer, is very adorable and quiet. You need to look after his vaccinations which are due in the same week while I will be away and keep all the requisite documents on dinner table to the doctor visit. Furthermore, some of the plants in kitchen needs sunlight and water on alternate days. There is an appointment with the electrician for servicing the heat furnace as it was incapacitated to supply warm water and heating.
In case of any emergency, you can connect with me on my cell phone or my cousin, Aman, he lives in Kitchner. I already requested international roaming with my service provider if in case I am unavailable his phone number is +6676898765. Once I will be back, share my experience with you.
I am hoping to meet you soon. Take care.
Thankyou
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...with my family. Its been a long time we havent met and missing the apple pie you made ...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...table to the doctor visit. Furthermore, some of the plants in kitchen needs sunlight and wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54726368159 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5968528952 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5130890785 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133136841035 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474719704693 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407759782579 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896000720378 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430327519947 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.