You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe the accommodation you require
say when you will need it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am honored that I am joining a vocational training course at your college in Greenmount, Ireland. I am writing this letter to request an accommodation which should be within 3 miles of campus. I am from India and working as a Software Engineer with the Gooogle. I would prefer to have an apartment off-campus because they will be cheap.
It will be my first time that I will be out of the country for studies on my own so I need a single room in a family house if possible Indian family. I won't be having a problem to share the washroom and the kitchen area, and I am vegetarian. My course duration is of 2 months and it will be fine to have a room for 2 months 15 days. I will be coming on 26th June and leave by 15th September but it should provide basic amenities like washing machine, microwave and air conditioner due to summer.
Would you be able to send me a few samples? I would connect to the owner and make the advance payments if necessary. Is it fine if I bring my own kitchen utensils as I am uncomfortable to use any other? Please let me know if you have any queries regarding my essential items.
I am waiting to hear from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ich should be within 3 miles of campus. I am from India and working as a Software...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s a Software Engineer with the Gooogle. I would prefer to have an apartment off-c...
^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31739130435 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6031426405 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0124772123 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9285714286 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131928004621 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483221698785 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598344094618 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841130753554 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461022489307 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.