Some people are convinced that mature age employees are beneficial to a company. Others think that younger employees contribute more and hence are more beneficial to a company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although, matured employee and young employee both are the significant part of companies. Some people believe that matured employee are more beneficial to a company than young employee, others believe the opposite and think young people are more productive for the company. In my opinion also, young employee would benefit the organization more.
To start with, Elderly employees are more experienced and hence could help the companies for issues that young people had never experienced. For example, a person who had worked with organization for twenty years knows how to prioritize multiple projects based on previous relations with the companies who ordered the project, however it could not be possible for a fresher to do so. Along with that matured staff has great knowledge and skills to work under different environment while the young generation is more comfortable in a stable situation rather than challenging environment.
On the other side, young employees offer many other benefits to the company such as computer expertise and energetic behavior. Today’s generation is an expert to work on computer thus saves a lot of time and efforts. while the aged employee will do that same work on paper more comfortably but would be more time-consuming. other significant advantage of employing young staff is that they are more energetic and enthusiastic and thus could be more productive to the company. also young people’s age is the age of learning, they learn things fast and with great zeal.
As per my opinion, it is better for organization to employ youngster. As matured employee are afraid of learning new things while fresher are open to learn new things and expand their horizons. also young employees are capable of handling multiple tasks together for example, we could appoint an employee for on site projects monitoring and managing offshore staff as well. they are more enthusiastic and energetic and could be more productive as compared to matured employee.
To conclude, both of the ages have their own benefits to offer the company. matured employee could better serve the company through his immense knowledge and experience and fresher’s also benefit the company by their enthusiastic and learning nature. In my opinion Younger employee could provide more benefits in respect of growth of the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29946524064 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79961718581 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8034607152 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335720751604 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126553001166 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923539043851 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214600114536 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104781886185 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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