some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends. other thinks there are many important things that can be done to show care and appreciation. discuss both the views and give your opinion
Love and care are two important ingredients of any relationship.There are many way to show these feelings to our dear ones. Some people finds present giving as most appropriate way to show appreciation, while other thinks there are many other ways to do so. I personally also believe that gifts are not the only way to show our love and care. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and provide statements that supports my belief.
First of all, gifts are token of love, everyone loves to receive gift. We exchange gifts on many occasions such as mother's day, valentine's day, Christmas , birthdays, anniversaries and so on.We always give presents to those whom we love.It takes a lot of effort to choose a perfect gift for the receiver, which shows our love. For an instance , if i have to give a birthday gift to my sister, i would collect her pictures and make a beautiful photo-collage to gift her. we do so , only if we love the person who receives the gift. Gifts can also be collected and stored as memories to be cherished later.
On the other hand, Gifts are wastage of money, if the receiver does not like it or need something else more necessarily.Just an example, If my nephew needs financial help for college admission and I gift him a branded watch, it will be of no use to him, he would be more delighted if I assist him for college admission. Lets take another example, I love my grand mother a lot hence I always accompany her to visit hospital and take proper care of her. Such acts of routine helps and care also represents our love and respect to our dear ones.
In conclusion, Although people love to exchange gifts in our day-to-day occasions but there are many other ways to express our love and appreciation.In my opinion, gifts are not only way to express our feelings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59442724458 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71073326317 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6274737969 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230044419003 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940588258132 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882187231299 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16369612288 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144130829563 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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