In many countries, rates of diabetes are increasing and fitness level decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve them.
The biggest matter of concern of many countries around the world is the health of its citizen. There is a decrease in the fitness level on the other side there is an increase in the rate of diabetes. This essay examines main causes of these problems including poor diet chart and busy life style. Further this essay also suggest some measures that can be taken to tackle these problems.
To begin with, One of the primary reason of the above listed problems is 'Poor diet chart'. Nowadays we are more dependent on frozen meals and ready to make recipes. Also we are very fond of eating junk food as compared to our earlier generations. The level of sugar intake has also increased a lot in the form of cookies , shakes and other artificially sweet desserts. Another factor that inflate these problems is 'busy work schedules'. We hardly spend any time for our fitness. Earlier people used to wake-up early to do exercises, jogging and meditation but unfortunately due to our hectic life-style we do not practice these activities. It is very hurtful to say that even being equipped with fancy gym equipment and health monitoring devices, we do not have time for our body.
It is utmost required to take some necessary measures to resolve these problems. There should be free cooking programs that explain how to cook healthy food in less time. This will cut our dependency on junk food and frozen food. Also there should be time management skills programs that explains how to manage work life and personal life in more balanced way. There is a need to understand the very famous quote 'Health is Wealth'.
In conclusion the two major factors of increased diabetes rate and decreased fitness level are bad diet habits and busy work culture. The preventive measures such as social programs that demonstrates the value of good health and better time management skills will solve these problems to great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84709480122 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42854264495 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5456855555 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189358462711 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538033988622 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517967797188 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128716215713 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730514394522 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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