some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Public health has become one of the most considerable problems nowadays. Some people suggest that increasing the number of sports facilities is an optimum method to improve it while opponents doubt the effect and argue that other measures should be implemented. In my opinion, several steps should be taken at the same time in order to achieve this goal.
Supporters believe that people can have more opportunities to do physical exercises if more sports facilities are constructed. In this way, people can have easier access to gyms and fitness centers where they can jog, swim and do strength training more frequently, which has a positive impact on dwellers’ health. In contrast, for example, if these facilities are far from residence area and business district, which means people have to spend several hours in commuting, there is no denying that they would rather go home and have a good sleep after a hard-working day.
On the other hand, this measure may not work since people are too busy to have time to care about their physical health. They often have no chance but to work overtime to earn enough salaries in order to cope with the soaring basic costs such as housing and food prices. And building more sports facilities sometimes even makes the situation worse because the government will probably impose heavier tax on workers so that more money can be raised for facility construction.
As far as I’m concerned, several measures including increasing the number of those facilities and income of residents should be combined to improve public health. People will feel less stressful with more money and subsequently begin to raise the awareness of doing physical activities to keep fit. The authority can also provide public bicycles and encourage people to use them to travel to work or get around. This can increase the amount of exercises for citizens which is beneficial to their physical conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10691823899 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666822013 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6718224029 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23701228872 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882834040967 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636412598989 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152521220596 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416128281648 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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