Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As compared to past decades, the crime rates are rapidly increased in most of the countries. By this, some people argued that it is happened because of poverty and social problems while others said that they are caused by the people who are bad. I totally agree with the first statement because the need for food and money make a person to do crime and direct in the place which harms others.
In one hand, many people who are less mannered and bad in their behaviors are rude, they have emotional traumas. The over obsessiveness and social insecurity surround, move them to the point of depression and anxiety. However, when this type of person face situations like holding grudges, heartbreak, insults, unhealthy competition, and no appreciation, they become violent and vicious. In this instance, they may choose to go for wrong habits like drugs, smoking, drinking and other bad habits which generally led to uncertain crimes in some ways.
On the other hand, the poor people who live in slums and have none of the options to fulfill their daily requirements create a criminal mind. To illustrate, the uneducated children and adults today more often join the world of crime, they even get training's for stealing things and how to be a part of a gang. From this, they start to grow up with a mindset that the only option to survive is learning the techniques of getting money through any illegal work. Moreover, the social issues like less happiness, backwardness, lack of opportunities, fights, domestic violence, and biases come along with the factors which made them aggressive and unconscious for deciding the good and bad. Furthermore, they are even don't understand what they are doing and differentiate between do's and donts.
In conclusion, I believe that if poor people get proper materials for their living and support from the government in terms of education, job, social gatherings, cultural involvement and respect in society. The honor in the society improves their standard of living and approach of think which decreased the feeling of unhappiness put an effort to downfall in crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ood and bad. Furthermore, they are even dont understand what they are doing and diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01709401709 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65912257442 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603988603989 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6781367341 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283134880865 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903348364051 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906433830231 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170943947433 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652057111911 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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