Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, news media plays a more and more important role in our daily life. some people advocate the contention that newspaper is still the most important origin to get the newest information for every citizen. I completely disagree with that view point, considering that online news media has become the most influential media format.
On the one hand, newspaper is not the fastest approach to get knowledge of the latest affairs all over the world due to essential flaw. Since manufacturing a batch of newspaper includes the processes of editing passage content, press newspaper and deliver it to the reader who books it, the whole procedure usually takes at least two or three days. However, in the contrast of internet media, as soon as the news is public, every person can get informed of it. For example, the first time Notre Dame Cathedral was burnt down by an unexpected fire, many people instantly know the information and prepare to offer financial aid package to France government. therefore, in terms of propagating speed, online new media has overwhelming advantages on its counterpart.
On the other hand, electrical media also has some edges that newspaper doesn’t obtain. it is becoming an effective and feasible method for the public to participate in politic activities. For example, many governments or press have built their official website where normal people can read news, write comments about particular issues or discuss relevant affairs. therefore, this website is transformed into a convenient medium to convey public thoughts on new policy or other affairs to relevant officials.
In conclusion, due to the excellent advantages, internet new media has surpassed newspaper and become the most important source to acquire the latest news.
- Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. 61
- Some people think teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or more interested in. To what extent do you agree? 73
- Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because in has more influence that other forms of media To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. 11
- Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3074204947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77239501718 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8833789654 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0517503635371 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195121749102 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214288294228 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0311821671184 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258138539728 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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