Global problems are related to government and international organizations. what are the problems and what is your opinion?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that global issues are increasingly affect government and international organization. In my opinion, there are some serious concerning issues that effect globally and have greater impact on government and other organizations. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important aspects of this statement before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that global problems are one of the main concerning issues of this contemporary world. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that depletion of ozone layer is the major concerning issue of this society. Moreover, this issue has addressed several times on global scale to deal with. As a prime example, according to recent research from the department of medical science, with effective interventions in developed nation the emission of harmful gases in environment contributes global warming.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that rapidly accelerating population all around the world due to technological advancement that effects mortality rates. Despite all major interventions to control population, this issue is still a big agenda in underdeveloped nations. Afterwards, certain deadly and other harmful diseases is another major concern of all government and international organizations, which includes epidemic, cancers and other psychological illnesses.
To recapitulate, foregoing propounds that major concerning issues on global scale need to be solved at higher levels to eradicate at effective levels. Therefore ides that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, still, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78656126482 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14144965951 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2878614123 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129633480547 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048541928853 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544688858265 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751440717736 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454980421584 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.