You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben Saud and I have been using your premium banking services for nearly ten years. I am writing in response to your letter requesting an acknowledgement of a new bank card and would like to inform you that the debit card was missing from the envelope. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate I had placed a request for a new debit card as the electronic chip of my old debit card was not working properly. Although I received an envelope however to my surprise it was empty hence I am really concerned about the missing debit card. Additionally, I would like to highlight that in the past, similar incidents have happened with my friends leading to the unauthorized use of their card at various retail outlets leading to huge financial loss.
Lastly, I would like to understand the action which your bank will take in order to recover the missing card.
I look forward to your email with a detailed response.
Yours sincerely
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Ben Saud and I have been usin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68604651163 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61648577995 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3890771213 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347698958231 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130122138934 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123952315604 0.0603063233224 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190132885712 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134008811009 0.0580467560999 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.