Many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough exercises. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
It is important to consider that why in today's fast paced life, people do not do any activity to keep themselves fit. In this essay, I will explore some causes associated with this and propose some solutions to tackle this issue.
First of all, the main factor which contribute to this problem is lack of time. As inflation rate is increasing day by day, people need to work over time in order to fulfill their basic needs. Therefore, sometime they failed to balance between personal and professional life to earn more money. For example, many time companies offer double pay to employees in over time. So, if they work overtime, they lefted a very less time for their daily routine. Hence, they skip physical exercise. However, to solve this problem, governments should fix working hours and pass the ordinance for national wage regulation. So that, people become less tempted to money and leave work place on time. As a result of this, they can find time for themselves.
Furthermore, in today's world, private club membership is becoming more expensive and there are less public space to recreate. In other words, because of excessive traffic and congestion, governments mostly focus to build vertical concrete buildings rather than recreational sports complex and jogging parks. As a consequence, they get demotivation to do exercises. In contrast, to handle this situation, authorities should focus more on building sports clubs, gardens and urban forest to provide a place for exercise. To clarify, if people find more green space and cheaper club membership, they begin to do exercise.
In conclusion, while people do not do enough physical activity in today's era, this problem is not insurmountable. In my view, it is the government's responsibility to tackle this issue, and they should begin by considering some of the proposed solutions above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75285516602 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1036317041 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272286603642 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872962524241 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980408932334 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207399934888 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105842364828 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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