Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them?
Human has come a long way from their primitives lives and has made it possible to commute to different places of the Earth despite the national boundaries. However, tourism is responsible for the considerable damage to nature problems by way of pollution and other things. Nevertheless, alleviating this problem is not merely a dream.
To count the maladies, the preponderant one is the pollution which is caused by harmful gases emitted in huge amount by planes and vehicles used by travellers along with the waste in form of plastic bags and litter thrown away by them. To instantiate, according to World Environmental Organization, tourism is one of the leading causes of increasing environmental pollution which is escalating rapidly. Another issue is the scarcity of land, happening due to construction of new buildings, infrastructure s and places for the accommodation, entertainment and attracting the international travel s to earn money. For this land, lots of trees are cut to create space which leads to global warming and reducing amount of carbon dioxide. Recently built statue of Vallabhbhai Patel is an excellent example of this.
Looking at the solutions, the simplest and best way is promoting Eco-tourism - environmental friendly tourism which is operated and organized by the many organizations like Responsibletourism and Keynder. To exemplify, Kenya and Bhutan are some examples of eco-tourism countries and are considered to the least polluted and most environment friendly nations. Another way of amelioration is to maintain and improve existing infrastructures rather than the building new ones. A good example of this can be cited in Bihar state of India where historical buildings are preserved for the sake of tourism.
To conclude, even though the problems may appear very big at the hand, however, there are always some solutions to alleviate the malady.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37373737374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22237822951 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7654694012 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168887281737 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536416442421 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538374398756 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858643877715 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018311538347 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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